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  1. #11
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    You're welcome dude, glad it's nothing too serious and you'll be back in the water soon, take care.

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    Good luck, Dogg....hope everything goes well.

    Solid post, me being ZGaff and all, I like those two stanzas to.

    Thought I'd tell you twice.

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    Nice post, SIsurfin-dawg. Although the stanza about being raped, ah, maybe not so much.

    And smooth sailing with the surgery. Make sure you get some good narcotic post-op painkillers to mix with your gin & tonics.

    Back in the ocean before you can say haiku-you-muthaflugggers.

  4. #14
    Quote Originally Posted by yankee View Post
    Nice post, SIsurfin-dawg. Although the stanza about being raped, ah, maybe not so much.
    I'm pretty sure that's why Wayne posted so quickly, he uses that line...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Koki Barrels View Post
    I'm pretty sure that's why Wayne posted so quickly, he uses that line...
    Glad to see you back, Koki. The Forum hasn't been the same without ya.

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    Mucho Grass y ass for the props. I hope they give me some good stuff too. You'll are awesome. If I have any left afterwards.....

    Chapter 5

    Seeking Strength

    Draamanu succumbs to lack of air and blacks out into
    An ayss of longing, remorse and humiliation.
    Sirens, wailing, gnashing, give way to dull roar
    Reverberating, filling giant canvas sails taut against the wind.

    Facing west, looking within his own heartbreak and despair,
    Draamanu pleads, "Give me strength,
    Oh bastards of fate, you who toy with life
    As a game of chess, a necessary elimination.
    Let me fulfill my destiny, meet my muse,
    Save the world and find the lost child
    In the forgotten drowned city."

    A giant whirlpool forms offshore the barrier reef,
    And then a wave, a towering wall of water,
    A sea change of upheaval,
    Lifts, sucks, throws, overcomes all form.
    Zuru appears, in his malevolent glory, then merges with the whirlpool.
    Draamanu is overpowered by the demons fury.
    All goes dark, lightless, totally black,
    Blacker than the darkest night.

    Chapter 6

    Naked

    Jyrascar, the trickster, the contrary teacher,
    The coyote spirit of upheaval, appears unto Draamanu
    On the other side of the vortex.
    "purify your soul of all desire and what you seek shall appear.
    You must give to gain."

    Draamanu weeps tears of remorse,
    For the longing he never had,
    All the lost love he never knew.
    A cold harsh wind howls from the north and rattles
    The bones of the dead.

    All unwanted things cease to be.
    All his clothes are stripped bare,
    His hair denuded by arctic blast, until
    Draamanu naked, bald, frozen is exposed to no one.
    But exposed none the less and lost and forgotten.

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    good game hope your surgery goes well, idk wtf those hyku things are? there not in english.

  8. #18
    sisurfdogg here is a video to watch before you go into surgery....good scripture

    http://youtu.be/fAQSA4M_hBY

  9. #19
    Thanks, yankee. I'll give you a hand with the dousche canoes, been hung up on a couple streets in town...but my sites come up here soon.

    Quote Originally Posted by sandblasters View Post
    good game hope your surgery goes well, idk wtf those hyku things are? there not in english.
    Lmao....sandblasters, you rock!

    Wayne, I was at church the other day and during the sermon the priest said no one who has done meth or crack rock can enter the Kingdom of God no matter if they quit or not. Sucks for you, dude.
    Last edited by Koki Barrels; Jul 16, 2014 at 03:05 AM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Koki Barrels View Post
    Thanks, yankee. I'll give you a hand with the dousche canoes, been hung up on a couple streets in town...but my sites come up here soon.



    Lmao....sandblasters, you rock!

    Wayne, I was at church the other day and during the sermon the priest said no one who has done meth or crack rock can enter the Kingdom of God no matter if they quit or not. Sucks for you, dude.
    Oh, man. Koki is back with a vengeance.