Haiku

Discussion in 'All Discussions' started by sisurfdogg, Feb 15, 2017.

  1. seldom seen

    seldom seen Well-Known Member

    Aug 21, 2012
  2. Turk182

    Turk182 Well-Known Member

    255
    Jan 26, 2017
    Believe in Nothing,
    but surf, music, spice melange,
    Always remember!
     

  3. frost

    frost Well-Known Member

    Jul 31, 2014
    who made you the haiku pro?
     
  4. CBSCREWBY

    CBSCREWBY Well-Known Member

    Feb 21, 2012
    Masters in English,

    University.

    Ya'll see how clever I am? :rolleyes:
     
  5. Turk182

    Turk182 Well-Known Member

    255
    Jan 26, 2017
    shouldn't it be like
    this professor of english?
    Serious ask here.
     
  6. yankee

    yankee Well-Known Member

    Sep 26, 2008
    Calm down hairfrosty, none of this Kraaaaaaapola is anything resembling 'haiku'

    A major form of Japanese verse, written in 17 syllables divided into 3 lines of 5, 7, and 5 syllables, and employing highly evocative allusions and comparisons, often on the subject of nature or one of the seasons.
     
  7. CBSCREWBY

    CBSCREWBY Well-Known Member

    Feb 21, 2012
    Awe, Fu(k you and your sensible definitions, Yankee!!!

    And you Turk.... I took Frosty's seven syllable sentence, (alliteration right there) and sandwiched it between my 5 syllable sentences....

    I'm an artist; I shouldn't have to explain myself...:rolleyes:


    Please Note I am in no means serious about any of this ish.. I'm bored and I'm entertaining myself! (and Myslef... Urslef's attractive younger sister)
     
  8. yankee

    yankee Well-Known Member

    Sep 26, 2008
  9. Turk182

    Turk182 Well-Known Member

    255
    Jan 26, 2017

    My Apologies,
    Ya'll see how clever I am?
    7 Syllables.
     
  10. CBSCREWBY

    CBSCREWBY Well-Known Member

    Feb 21, 2012
    Welle done!
     
  11. Turk182

    Turk182 Well-Known Member

    255
    Jan 26, 2017
    I'll try to see art
    but sometimes you must explain
    Yes! Thank you Sensei!
     
  12. sisurfdogg

    sisurfdogg Well-Known Member

    Jun 17, 2013
    Originally Posted by CBSCREWBY [​IMG]

    Masters in English,
    Ya'll see how clever I am?
    University.


    Knocked out the last line
    with one five syllable word
    Totally Awesome!
    [​IMG] 0:54

    [h=3][/h]
     
  13. frost

    frost Well-Known Member

    Jul 31, 2014
    screwed this tread now(5)
    im out found freedom picturesque(7)
    gentle breeze now(5)


    now whaty say?
     
  14. CBSCREWBY

    CBSCREWBY Well-Known Member

    Feb 21, 2012
    That you can't count....

    But I still think you rock!
     
  15. sisurfdogg

    sisurfdogg Well-Known Member

    Jun 17, 2013
    He's from the souff. Some of their vowels count for two syllables.
     
  16. ChavezyChavez

    ChavezyChavez Well-Known Member

    Jun 20, 2011
    Work with Long Pry Bar
    Snap back hit me in the nuts
    Oh the agony