English Essay

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  1. seanmcgaff

    seanmcgaff Well-Known Member

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    Oct 10, 2012
    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Gle_4Tzltig

    Lemme know what you think. The video is a supplement to an essay I wrote in my English class about how surfers have a bond with one another because of the unique experiences that they share through surfing and because of the way each individual surfer has an intimate relationship with nature/ocean which can only be understood by other surfers.
     
  2. HARDCORESHARTHUFFER-RI

    HARDCORESHARTHUFFER-RI Well-Known Member

    Sep 17, 2013
    a humancentipad like bond that yank>sandblaster>mfitz>wayne>roy>chuck>emass share?

    oh no! not the cuttlefish!

    (obviously emass is last)

    btw, finally some mothafuggin tube shots with that gopro of yours, nice work
    and at 2:01, where did you find the younger, broke-down Chris Multisanti to be in your vid?
    2:30 was cringeworthy

    hope you get an adequate score for your class

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  3. seanmcgaff

    seanmcgaff Well-Known Member

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    Oct 10, 2012
    my sorry-ass attempt at an air at 2:30 lol
     
  4. seldom seen

    seldom seen Well-Known Member

    Aug 21, 2012
    Good stuff essay vatos locos forever holmes.jpg , I like your narration too. Some friggin glassy goodness in there.
     
  5. nynj

    nynj Well-Known Member

    Jul 27, 2012
    Blood in blood out... Vatos Locos forever Holmes
     
  6. seanmcgaff

    seanmcgaff Well-Known Member

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    Oct 10, 2012
    surfside gang puto
     
  7. The Incorrigible Steel Burrito VII

    The Incorrigible Steel Burrito VII Well-Known Member

    Oct 19, 2014
    HOLY CRAP IS THAT A CAT?!?!? A GANSTER CAT?! I want one. I so want domesticated animals with the ability to sell drugs.

    If thats not a cat... well then... is it a sheep?
     
  8. seldom seen

    seldom seen Well-Known Member

    Aug 21, 2012
    That's the most vato'd out cat known to man:cool:
     
  9. CaptJAQ

    CaptJAQ Well-Known Member

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    Jul 22, 2011
    Nice work.

    I know you didn't ask for critique, but I will offer this: Your voice over is pretty monotonous. (i.e. you make it sound really boring) Try to add some stoke to your reading.
     
  10. EmassSpicoli

    EmassSpicoli Well-Known Member

    Apr 16, 2013
    Dope essay, essay! (seldom that was gold)

    Always dig your stuff sean. Maybe I'll see you out at Creek one of these days and we can trade barrells.
     
  11. seanmcgaff

    seanmcgaff Well-Known Member

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    Oct 10, 2012
    yup, my buddy said the same thing
     
  12. seanmcgaff

    seanmcgaff Well-Known Member

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    Oct 10, 2012
    can't wait for firing gravels! coming back to orange county next week for winter break
     
  13. EmassSpicoli

    EmassSpicoli Well-Known Member

    Apr 16, 2013
    Nice bro. I'll be there. Report for Salt looks dope! The wahines saying there's been lots of rain round there though. Good. The area needs it bad.
     
  14. bubs

    bubs Well-Known Member

    Sep 12, 2010
    Thanks for sharing. I enjoyed it.
     
  15. DosXX

    DosXX Well-Known Member

    Mar 2, 2013
    Great vid as usual. Always enjoy them. I marvel at how clean the water looks and recognize the Morro Bay area and Newport Beach.
    In your narrative try varying the tone and perhaps the rate of your delivery a bit. Sounds like you're reading instructions for assembling something. A little more feeling. After all, surfing is something you love.
    Best of luck in school. I have fond memories of my time at Poly.