Good luck, Dogg....hope everything goes well.
Solid post, me being ZGaff and all, I like those two stanzas to.
Thought I'd tell you twice.
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Thread: Demons & Prophets
Jul 16, 2014, 12:51 AM #12
Nice post, SIsurfin-dawg. Although the stanza about being raped, ah, maybe not so much.
And smooth sailing with the surgery. Make sure you get some good narcotic post-op painkillers to mix with your gin & tonics.
Back in the ocean before you can say haiku-you-muthaflugggers.
Jul 16, 2014, 01:43 AM #14
Jul 16, 2014, 01:48 AM #15Senior Member
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Mucho Grass y ass for the props. I hope they give me some good stuff too. You'll are awesome. If I have any left afterwards.....
Draamanu succumbs to lack of air and blacks out into
An ayss of longing, remorse and humiliation.
Sirens, wailing, gnashing, give way to dull roar
Reverberating, filling giant canvas sails taut against the wind.
Facing west, looking within his own heartbreak and despair,
Draamanu pleads, "Give me strength,
Oh bastards of fate, you who toy with life
As a game of chess, a necessary elimination.
Let me fulfill my destiny, meet my muse,
Save the world and find the lost child
In the forgotten drowned city."
A giant whirlpool forms offshore the barrier reef,
And then a wave, a towering wall of water,
A sea change of upheaval,
Lifts, sucks, throws, overcomes all form.
Zuru appears, in his malevolent glory, then merges with the whirlpool.
Draamanu is overpowered by the demons fury.
All goes dark, lightless, totally black,
Blacker than the darkest night.
Jyrascar, the trickster, the contrary teacher,
The coyote spirit of upheaval, appears unto Draamanu
On the other side of the vortex.
"purify your soul of all desire and what you seek shall appear.
You must give to gain."
Draamanu weeps tears of remorse,
For the longing he never had,
All the lost love he never knew.
A cold harsh wind howls from the north and rattles
The bones of the dead.
All unwanted things cease to be.
All his clothes are stripped bare,
His hair denuded by arctic blast, until
Draamanu naked, bald, frozen is exposed to no one.
But exposed none the less and lost and forgotten.
Jul 16, 2014, 01:51 AM #16
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- Punching Latex Dummys in Barns
good game hope your surgery goes well, idk wtf those hyku things are? there not in english.
Thanks, yankee. I'll give you a hand with the dousche canoes, been hung up on a couple streets in town...but my sites come up here soon.
Wayne, I was at church the other day and during the sermon the priest said no one who has done meth or crack rock can enter the Kingdom of God no matter if they quit or not. Sucks for you, dude.
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Jul 16, 2014, 03:30 AM #19
Jul 16, 2014, 12:24 PM #20Senior Member
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I think it's gunwales not gunnels