Demons & Prophets

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  1. sisurfdogg

    sisurfdogg Well-Known Member

    Jun 17, 2013
    Chapter 18

    Ascending

    Draamanu, revitalized by the prophet's words
    Walks along the path toward the drowning city.
    The looming mountains of Dyssacous rise to the sky,
    Parting the clouds.
    A narrow cutback presents itself as a
    Route up and over the imposing range.
    Draamanu, of earth and sea, on conception of the
    Hardships of the climb, sees no other way,
    Claws and scratches over the rocky precipice,
    Breathing the thin air, feeling the lightheadedness of the sherpa.

    Air becomes mist becomes empty void,
    Extinguishing all remnants of oxygen, nourishment, prana.
    Each breath a vain struggle to extract life from emptiness.
    Nausea, dizziness, vertigo, envelope and strangle Draamanu,
    Like deadly vines of a flesh eating plant.

    Zekehaani, giant condor who flies at the top of the world,
    Beak sharpened from the bones of its prey,
    Strikes Draamanu thru the heart and devours it in
    One sickening, sucking gulp.
     
  2. sisurfdogg

    sisurfdogg Well-Known Member

    Jun 17, 2013
    Chapter 19

    Descending

    Life drains, like light that dims and fades and becomes etched in memory.
    Draamanu's body shrivels in the sun and decays.
    The seven blue black hawks of doom descend from the sky
    Above and eat his entrails.

    Crystalline seawater, blue, green, turquoise,
    Lapping at the distant shore of an ancient
    Shell strewn beach.
    Draamanu dives down below the surface,
    Grabs a chambered nautilus from the shallow reef.
    Is it a dream, or the last throes of consciousness,
    The spinning blades of a fan, electricity recently interrupted,
    Winding down inexorably towards inevitable stillness?

    Maximillani, spirit of wind and sea spray whispers to Draamanu,
    "Grasp the buoyancy that envelopes your soul,
    The grace of vision, the spark of life".

    Draamanu washes up on the ancient shell strewn beach and
    Belches shells and salt and slime from his lungs, and
    Breathes the first breath of his new life.
     

  3. sisurfdogg

    sisurfdogg Well-Known Member

    Jun 17, 2013
    Here are the last three chapters. Thank you so much everyone for your thoughts and prayers. I am a pu$$y and am scared of the knife, and heavy drugs, and appreciate any positive energy. I hope some of y'all enjoyed some of this.

    Chapter 20

    Protection

    Three large dogs run full bore at Draamanu,
    Fangs bared, eyes wild.
    They come with loud exuberant barking,
    Encircling his body in figure eight patterns.

    Three shimmering ladies run up to the glowing Draamanu,
    Bearing fruit and flowers, encircle his waist and chest
    With their flowing arms, chanting, "Save the lost child,
    He is waiting for your return."

    Three yellow hummingbirds flit about Draamanu's head,
    Circling his neck, his eyes, his mouth, his nose,
    Surrounding him with a trail of golden mist.
    They beckon in Draamanu's ears,
    "Fear not, you are encased in beauty.
    Go forth and rescue the drowning, lost child."

    Skies blacken, wind howls, bolts of lightning split trees.
    Seven hawks of doom circle overhead, laughing.
    Heberdanaka bursts forth, blasting buildings and streets and
    Dykes and bridges with overwhelming force, with evil waves of
    Toxins, borne on snake infested, dead body infested surge.

    Daaamanu stands firm, surrounded by the
    Nine protective circles of Love and light.
    Draamanu parts the black deluge with his gaze,
    Repelling the oil slick ooze and stench.
    Draamanu continues forward toward the drowning city.

    Chapter 21

    Contraction and Distension

    A rolling wave of a shining sea rises up, crests and peaks.
    Draamanu is swept toward the spires and towers and last
    Remnants of the city of his birth.
    Deluged by storm and swamp,
    Returned to its primordial origins of ooze and slime,
    The city beckons Draamanu back home. The water
    Recedes until calm and clear beneath his feet.

    Draamanu's ankles become entrapped in the ever faster
    Flowing tide, dragging him to his destiny.
    Cretelonu, the enemy of love, his grasp loosened and
    Repelled by Draamanu's shield power,
    Gnashes his teeth and flies back into the gloom,
    Disappearing into the blackness.

    Chapter 22

    Redemption

    Nourished by the five elements,
    Energized by the crystal blue sea,
    Draamanu strides forth.
    Harnessing the forces of opposition,
    Following the prophesies of the ancient masters,
    Draamanu becomes electrified like a battery.
    Draamanu shines forth, a beacon of pure radiant light,
    Evaporating all gloom, all stench, all despair.

    Abandoned buildings wait for the return of life.
    Draamanu enters the gates of the drowned city,
    Ancient city filled with cries, with ghosts, with layers of
    Dissolved cultures and lives lived and love lost.
    A great white searing flash evaporates all traces of life, a
    Mushroom cloud of implosion and annihilation.

    Draamanu awakens, his body wracked with sweat and
    Salt and trembling with fear,
    "Papa, wake up, the wind is filling the sails,"
    Implores Arlinonius, the Child.
    Rubbing his eyes, tying the sails taught, fixing the rudder,
    Draamanu hugs his son and laughs.
    Warm gentle breeze returns the father and son home.
     
    Last edited: Jul 17, 2014
  4. Betty

    Betty Well-Known Member

    Oct 14, 2012
    Anyone who isn't scared of the knife is ignorant or has a brain lesion in their fear center. That's not being a pu$$y, it's being realistic. And minor surgery is surgery that's happening to someone else.
     
  5. yankee

    yankee Well-Known Member

    Sep 26, 2008
    Betty is not a wahine to be trifled with.
     
  6. sisurfdogg

    sisurfdogg Well-Known Member

    Jun 17, 2013
    Thanks for the perspective. Just like it's not a busy hurricane season unless you're the one place that gets hit.
     
  7. sisurfdogg

    sisurfdogg Well-Known Member

    Jun 17, 2013
    Thanks for all the good vibes and prayers! Surgery was a success. The head is alive and well. I can go swimming in 2 weeks! Thanks for reading my story. Blessings to all.
     
  8. yankee

    yankee Well-Known Member

    Sep 26, 2008
    Good to hear it.

    Unfortunately, waynetheinsaaane will likely attempt to take all the credit for your survival.
     
  9. DawnPatrol321

    DawnPatrol321 Well-Known Member

    Mar 6, 2012
    Glad to hear it, you'll be back in the water in no time
     
  10. MY SAVIOR

    MY SAVIOR Well-Known Member

    259
    Feb 21, 2014
    I take credit for nothing, enough said........................
     
  11. Koki Barrels

    Koki Barrels Well-Known Member

    Aug 14, 2008
    Your still a toolbox
     
  12. yankee

    yankee Well-Known Member

    Sep 26, 2008
    Then who is responsible for those 18 kids you forced your wife to produce?
     
  13. yankee

    yankee Well-Known Member

    Sep 26, 2008
  14. worsey

    worsey Well-Known Member

    Oct 13, 2013
    you can say that again.