Thoughts?

Discussion in 'Mid Atlantic' started by NSsurfer, Apr 3, 2009.

  1. NSsurfer

    NSsurfer Well-Known Member

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    Jan 8, 2009
    so i was bored of writing an essay and decided to write a poem.. its topic.. you guessed it..surfing.. give me your thoughts, good and bad.

    Thanks

    Sitting patiently, gazing eyes peeled
    I scan the horizon, I listen, I feel
    Then out in the distance, faint lines appear
    The offshore wind blows them, creating millions of small tears
    Kicking figure 8’s I spin my board around,
    I lay down and without a sound, paddle and frown.
    For i have missed the wave, it has gone unridden
    I was too late, too afraid, unwilling
    Here comes another, i paddle harder this time
    I feel its power beneath me, everything is fine
    I plant my hands then plant my feet,
    I stand up, lean foward, cruising down the steeps
    The deeper i drop, the more free i feel
    As if every negative thing has gone away, like an invisible shield
    i am one with mother nature, experiencing her first hand.
    This world is amazing, both sea and land.
    As the wave finishes I paddle back,
    i love the sea, i love this sport, now lets hope for a shack.